I feel really honoured you’ve chosen me for this position and I’m glad to tell you that I want to accept it. I’m really grateful for your kindness and consideration. I’m enthusiastic to work for such an outstanding company like yours and as collaborator of your marketing office I will do my very best to work with the team.
there are some little mistakes. "and as a collaborator" [remember the indefinite article for professions, I am a teacher...].
I feel particularly honored to have been chosen for this position... and it is my wish to accept it... It is within my interest to work with the team and to offer my best... [or some such... :-)]
But altogether this is a great letter, Let's hope you will soon have to write a similar one!
This is the letter I've written!
ReplyDelete14th December 2013
Dear Sirs,
I feel really honoured you’ve chosen me for this position and I’m glad to tell you that I want to accept it. I’m really grateful for your kindness and consideration.
I’m enthusiastic to work for such an outstanding company like yours and as collaborator of your marketing office I will do my very best to work with the team.
Sincerely yours,
Silvia Santorum
Dear Silvia,
ReplyDeletethere are some little mistakes. "and as a collaborator" [remember the indefinite article for professions, I am a teacher...].
I feel particularly honored to have been chosen for this position...
and it is my wish to accept it...
It is within my interest to work with the team and to offer my best... [or some such... :-)]
But altogether this is a great letter, Let's hope you will soon have to write a similar one!
Have a great day, Anny
Thank you! :)
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